All Comments on 'Naked Vows Ch. 03'

by Robin_Maxwell

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Jarring word choices

You're an entertaining storyteller, but issues with mechanics and usage pervade your writing. It's really distracting. To pick an example at random, when someone is losing interest in something, they're getting "bored," not "board." As a second example, proper names are always capitalized: "Frank," not "frank." The good news is that a competent editor can help sand off all the rough edges.

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