All Comments on 'Jac'

by SylverLyf

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I liked it

Good story, I loved the ending, but my goodness you mis-spelled a lot of words! It was rather distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Beautiful Story of friends Whom Love Each Other

I Loved Your Story - And I Found The Ending To be A Wonderful Surprise.

Please Give Us More Of Your Writing - - -

Nurse Kris

MaonaighMaonaighover 8 years ago
Not bad

Not a bad little story but I think you could have done with a good editor. There are a lot of spelling errors and what could be typos, and you had a tendency to change tenses within the tale. However, it was enjoyable enough and I've given you four stars---it would have been five but for the errors.

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