It's cold, but there are flowers. White flowers. That fall from trees.
Then it's hot. The wind sneezes. The soil smiles. I can't put it all together in a way that makes sense to me, as well written as it is.
is not caused by frost....sometimes it is just their time, TK U MLJ LV NV
...of Fall. And you show the contrast between a ritualistic concern with artificial beauty and the natural order, where beauty is renewable, and more precious for being so. Lovely!
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