All Comments on 'Petals'

by demure101

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DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
Mysterious

It's cold, but there are flowers. White flowers. That fall from trees.

Then it's hot. The wind sneezes. The soil smiles. I can't put it all together in a way that makes sense to me, as well written as it is.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
PETALS AND LEAVES ON THE GROUND

is not caused by frost....sometimes it is just their time, TK U MLJ LV NV

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Beautiful image...

...of Fall. And you show the contrast between a ritualistic concern with artificial beauty and the natural order, where beauty is renewable, and more precious for being so. Lovely!

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