All Comments on 'Friend's Hot Mom'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Horrible

You reset comments and ratings because, ironically, it was both your character and you that got butthurt from this story. Beyond bad, very little character development and feels like a milf porn converted to text and not a believable or likely tale. Normally I let these ones go, but you obviously didn't get the commenter's point, actually be a decent writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fun short story

There are some very realistic elements in this story. many lads have similar desire about friends mom. Some like to tease by showing cleavage and little upskirt. some play these games but few follow through.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fuck off

you dont need to go on and make such a big deal about it. its just a story, loser.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
cant wait!

to be a milf

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
love milfs

great story-here's to milfs everywhere thanks

talldarkfellowtalldarkfellowover 10 years ago
Sorry, but He's Got a Point.

Anonymous may have been a little rough in describing the problem with this story, but he wasn't wrong.

There are some hot phrases and the author does know how to frame a sexy situation, but the totally clinical discussion between the teen and Julie is very stilted and artificial. Any conversation like that would be really awkward, no matter what sexual context was going on under the surface.

And it's pretty unbelievable that not only would the mom immediately offer to "educate" her son's friend right there with her son sleeping(?) in the next room, she would also move right into anal "lessons" minutes later.

Significant room for improvement.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
bich

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thebug37thebug37over 8 years ago
Interesting Story

Reading how he become 'trained' in both manners of intercourse proved he had a thoughtful mind or he wasn't bashful. Either way you made it an interesting story; with the anal sex something such stories like this don't include. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fake

That's a cool story but I don't buy it, she wouldn't have done that if her husband stayed for poker you guys would have been caught

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fake AF

At least make it believable if you're gonna say it's a true story. It's your first time and you were fucking her like a beast? You wish. And you lasted longer than 30 seconds? You wish. And you fell asleep next to her when her husband was coming home from poker? Fake.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
thank you

for claiming a "normal" size penis. Soooo many of these stories can't be written without at least a 9" and even a 13" cock. We all know that is horse shit.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
In praise of older women.

Fantastically written story. Thank you, jorp

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I think it was a fantasy............a pipe dream. Her Son is in a room nearby, her husband will be home soon but yet she SCREAMED with a first climax and YELLED for him not to stop later.........

And....I'm sure that a virgin could "rock her world"...........

Keep dreaming.

I DO appreciate the "standard size" man gear, Not everyone has a 12" dick

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Not a chance this ever really happened, and the dialog between the young man and Julie isn't close to believable or realistic, and yeah screaming out while being fucked with your son asleep across the hall isn't realistic either, BUT... it's a fun hot fantasy for sure! Definitely the kind I had when I was younger myself.

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