All Comments on 'The Airplane Ride Home Ch. 02'

You like your big words then use "laying" when it should be "lying" This is a common, but jarring error in the writing of contributors who also often write of "laid" instead of "lay" eg "I laid in bed" - What?

i loved it can't wait to hear more.

... but it's getting pretty juvenile despite the fancy words

This is a very good story well thought out and executed. Yes, a little editing would be helpful, but won't increase the entertainment value by much. Is there another chapter coming? Thanks.

For the positive comments. The storyline is set for at least two more chapters. The ratings and feedback will determine how far we go.

I self edit. I will be more thorough.

This is one smokin' hot story. I'm glad that you are planning on two more chapters.

This is fucking sick! I'm ok with the incest however I don't think it's at all cool to cuckold the man who brought you into this world! It's rather sicka and deprave and you have to have a pretty sick mind to get off on something like this! Just sayin!!!

Mom's pussy will be stretched out by the time her young stud of a son has his way with her for a while.

She won't be able to say no to him now.

Thanks for the read.

Then i'm sick in the head and love it, this is a great story i've stumbled on.

In chapter 1 sam also put the cum wet towel in his mouth. In this chapter his mom did also.

I hope you breed a sister/daughter in moms womb

Fabulous loved it but a bit to light on the sex scene,especially loved the aspect of them been caught,its a trill, i know ive nearly been caught a few times in my younger years, it should of been longer and another great way to finish would of been for her to drop to her knees and lick him clean,and with the remnants of her son's cum in her mouth french kiss her husband when he came down to breakfast all the while looking at her son and smiling, a secret shared between mom and son.