Quite unique and very well written.
It'd be really interesting to see her continue her transformation.
Thank you! I have it all plotted out so it's just making the time to write it out. I'll start tomorrow on chapter 3. I'm glad y'all liked it because I haven't had a lot of comments at the other places I post.
I wonder if the main character has any family?
I enjoyed the gritty details along with the pacing, and I must agree with what has already been said...please continue this!
its a refreshing and interesting story, looking forward to ur 3rd chapter
I don't get it at all
Howdy! Which part? The whole thing or...?
i am. lol i am enjoying the complexity of lilly becoming something other and the other is melding with her victims to make it even more complex! it makes the story have a layer above and beyond just erotic horror or non human or whatever category. whoever anon was who wrote " i dont get it " did they read they first part and are they going to keep reading coz its sorta silly to say u dont get it when its not finished. i shall read on
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