All Comments on 'Eat me alive {Lovers' version}'

1. scron a guy that is weak, small, scrawny or varied combinations of those pitiful attributes. you can also say scronz for plural "What a scron that kid is" "too ...

2. The offspring of the Scron creature. Incredibly edgy around humans due to the torturous upbringing from the adult scron.

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must be a ms. or a weak alien ...5ed for sending me to the Donjon.

I spelled it wrong okay? I ment SCORN. Definition 3- A derisive or contemptuous action or speech. - Source,: Dictionary.com LOOK IT UP!

leaves desire in its wake, TK U MLJ LV NV

I can see you have good tastes....or maybe it you like to taste? Either way there is a lot of teeth involved.Grin.

When I give comments I like to give a critique of a persons work to try and help them as a writer. I've said a few times it's the kind of comments I would like to get but never seem to.

Go slowly. There is no rush. If you have to put the poem or story aside for a few weeks before you post it. Then read back through it. Those miss spelled words will kind of almost jump out at you then.

The site will still be here, ready to crucify you. Smiles.

Or love you.

You will get a little of both.

So thicken the skin, put pen to paper or fingers to keyboards..chisel to stone.. whatever.

Have the courage to write badly. (Mark Twain)

Now if i can just follow my own advice.

M.S.Tarot