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All Comments on 'A Slaying Song Tonight'

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DmitryDmitryover 11 years ago
What

a great story. Very cleverly done. One complaint though - TOO SHORT. Thank you.

horsechick91horsechick91over 11 years ago
awsome

Love this intresting take on santa. Could use another chapter once the contest is done though. You left the servents, and us, hanging.

NekoParksNekoParksover 11 years ago
Dark and Delicious

More please ... I have you saved in my favorites category, so I will know when you post another chapter or story. Boy, howdy, you can write. Thank you for sharing your story.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
I Love It!!

What a wonderful adult adaptation of the 'children's' tale!! I loved it's! Please keep writing!!

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