by MisterSade
This piece is too obvious, as if a Dominant's stream of consciousness is not restrained You tell too much and show too little. This makes this piece un-erotic.
Maybe, try again?
I'm going to spend some more time in the forum section, and keep learning.
I admit that story was an impulse.
Honesty and suggestions always appreciated.
or himself to do or not to do, TK U MLJ LV NV