All Comments on 'Three for Thee'

by HarryHill

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MisterSadeMisterSadeover 11 years ago
5 stars isn't enough.

A keeper to read and study.

Plus the formatting adds a level of presence and pleasance.

Thank you for writing.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
FOREPLAY BETWEEN THE MUSES

either mental or physical, TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
art thou seducin' a Poetess ,...

o lovelorn Harry ??! ----great job , boss !

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 11 years ago
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Thank goodness you stirred my conscience to come over here and read or I would have missed this gem, it's fabulous and I am green with envy that I didn't write it myself. Not sure about the middle alignment but I see that it does compliment 'tying nets of words'

njoyjadenjoyjadeover 11 years ago
You "let go of the lead line" perfectly,

bringing in a bounty for the table!

All three are witty and quite beautiful, my favorite being two! :)

DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
As the stalkee....

I've already commented on these in the Forum - but I think this is far and away among your best poems. It's not easy to be romantic without sounding either hallmark cardesque or just plain cheesy, but you pull it off. I like how you linked them together into one piece. I'm not totally convinced on the layout, but it doesn't detract from the poems so I guess it's harmless. Bravo!

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