by HarryHill
A keeper to read and study.
Plus the formatting adds a level of presence and pleasance.
Thank you for writing.
Thank goodness you stirred my conscience to come over here and read or I would have missed this gem, it's fabulous and I am green with envy that I didn't write it myself. Not sure about the middle alignment but I see that it does compliment 'tying nets of words'
bringing in a bounty for the table!
All three are witty and quite beautiful, my favorite being two! :)
I've already commented on these in the Forum - but I think this is far and away among your best poems. It's not easy to be romantic without sounding either hallmark cardesque or just plain cheesy, but you pull it off. I like how you linked them together into one piece. I'm not totally convinced on the layout, but it doesn't detract from the poems so I guess it's harmless. Bravo!