by Freedomslut
The story started out great but then lost me when he turned her into a dog. To me that turned what was a good story into a poor one. Just my opinion.
Yeah, this was disgusting. I wouldn't treat an animal the way he treated her. Sickening.
Buy a dog. This was a sick, pathetic story. Not even worth being called a fantasy or fiction - just trash. Barf.
it's fiction! (At least in this context.) Good grief!
Hang in there, Senselessly Gangbanged ....
This story is the worst i have read til now. First of all, it is not realistic, so nobody can relate to it. Next of all, the whole point of slavery is that the slave will be aroused too. And even in fiction, all slaves have a safe word or action or thing. A waste of time writing and a waste of time reading. Just disgusting.