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annanovaover 11 years agoJust one question
Where can I find a tree ornament like that?
Excellent story, TinyBeth.
WoNShadeover 11 years agoI love the elements where letting go is the main character's idea. Thank you for sharing.
LaRascasseover 11 years agoGood story here...
It didn't unnecessarily drag and managed to sustain my interest enough to read every word. A few metaphors (see: "Kevin shook like a live wire") threw me off a bit, but overall, I liked this effort a lot. 4/5 from my side (Really Liked it).
Anonymousover 10 years agoThank you for this wonderful story
First person can be a challenging POV for a writer. This is one of the best first-person narratives I've seen, particularly in the MC genre. The bi-sexual element was a nice touch as well. Nicely imagined and deftly realized.
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