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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
AS THE TIDE ROLLS IN

making pictures to the clouds. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
O Boy

Your poem's a treasure & a joy !

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
Colour

clouds are playing tag

does not fit the scheme

no one there to share the joy

sun grins

grey- greenish

maybe it does, maybe it does, but I wish someone would buy a few new tubes for you:

cerulean blue, cadmium yellow, but no fuckling burnt umber

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