All Comments on 'Shemale Becomes Friend Ch. 04'

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aspiringdevilaspiringdevilover 11 years ago
Loving this Series

I've read each as they've been posted and they keep being great. Of course I've liked the sex, but I also like seeing Max coming to terms with both his sexual desires and his clearly growing feelings for Joline. I can't wait to see where this story goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More

Hope it continues

Omega ManOmega Manover 11 years ago
Changes in the midst

Sounds like the friendship is taking a more intimate turn for the both of them. Turning into a nice series. Hope you continue writing about it

Naughtyboy1986Naughtyboy1986over 11 years ago
more more more

I look forward to the next chapter

jonathan8739jonathan8739over 11 years ago

I like story and how it's progressing. I hope you continue to write it and possibly longer chapters.

I only wish that I had a friend like Joline.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 9 years ago
ah!

Good! I'm glad you slipped him onto the path of redemption there at the end of this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Max was pretty unlikable and kind of a pouty immature bitch in this chapter. He chose to get into this and then treated Jolene shitty. He’s right, she deserves much better. He needs to correct it.

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