by refinedexperiences
I've read each as they've been posted and they keep being great. Of course I've liked the sex, but I also like seeing Max coming to terms with both his sexual desires and his clearly growing feelings for Joline. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Sounds like the friendship is taking a more intimate turn for the both of them. Turning into a nice series. Hope you continue writing about it
I like story and how it's progressing. I hope you continue to write it and possibly longer chapters.
I only wish that I had a friend like Joline.
Good! I'm glad you slipped him onto the path of redemption there at the end of this chapter.
Max was pretty unlikable and kind of a pouty immature bitch in this chapter. He chose to get into this and then treated Jolene shitty. He’s right, she deserves much better. He needs to correct it.