All Comments on 'The Gift'

by msterrilynn

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rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
unique

and it just screams for a 2nd chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Needs ending

This story is very nice but needs tightening up somewhat. It needs more description and more information about the gift and the recipient. The writer isn't personal enough. Good luck with more writing.

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