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Callipygian ode !

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A Beautiful Piece. The poem flows very nicely and has that rhyming too. A small suggestion would be for your next poem: You have two longer verses in the beginning. Try inserting a second set or even third set throughout the poem. This will make the poem more 'songlike',

However i must say, you have done a fine job here.