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Ishani's Saga: Memorable First Trip

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by blue_all12/06/12

nice

nice story

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by Anonymous12/06/12

Brilliant brill, but

As a first story that is incred, hot, brave, and I'm extra hard relating to a true history. Let part 2 come, and even roll thru details of your POST 18 thoughts, and married life. Then use your imagination pen, but cloud the validity. It's hot that way. Without jumping into insane like dimensions and stamina that out dreams dreams!
ALWAYS tho, keep yourself safe; from sex parasites, and moral moron purists violence.

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by Sanjayanand112/07/12

HOT

Sizzling Hot story. Enjoyed. Do write more

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by Anonymous12/07/12

Very sexy story, and good writing. More info in bio, please.

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by Shadowlands12/08/12

Excellent First Effort...

Thank you for the time and effort you put into writing this. It was a horny tale, well told. Even hornier if indeed a true tale. I liked the language it was written in. Exceedingly well written if English is your first language, and a fine effort if you are indeed Indian. I know little of India, but I imagine you are from a middle class background, and something of a an adventurer. A wonderful mix of traditional Indian wife, and a libertine. Demure in act, and a veritable demon in private. Enough to send the blood racing through any mans veins. I very much look forward to reading more of your stories. I may even take you up on your offer to mail you. Thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you so much.

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by Anonymous12/08/12

good story

one suggestion....could you include more bengali dialogue for the second part?

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by Anonymous12/10/12

VERY GOOD

YOUR WRITING ABILITY IS VERY NICE.KEEP WRITE ANOTHER PART OR ANOTHER STORY AS EARLY AS POSSIBLE

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by Anonymous12/11/12

Wonderful

EXCELLENT WRITING FOR A FIRST TIMER.YOUR NARRATING SKILLS AND ATTENTION TO DETAILS ARE PHENOMENAL.KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK.
PLEASE GIVE US ONE OR TWO BENGALI SENTENCES,BUT NOT A WHOLE LOT AS THIS MIXES UP THE FLAIR OF THE STORY.
PLEASE ALSO PROVIDE A LITTLE MORE PHYSICAL DETAILS ON ISHANI LIKE LOOKS,ATTIRE SHE WEARS WHEN SHE WENT OUT SHOPPING (LIKE LOW TRANSPARENT SAREE,THIN BACK BLOUSE) ETC IN NEXT PART

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by Anonymous01/17/13

Horny one

Wow! I had a raging hard on & i fucked my gf later on n it was an amazing fuck we ever had!!!!!

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by Supernova3202/03/13

Great work, good language, good narrative, the two bengali sentences added to the effect.

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