All Comments on 'The Morning After'

by TxRad

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rsqman68rsqman68over 11 years ago
More...More

I certainly hope there will be more chapters cumming soon.

annanovaannanovaover 11 years ago
Very nicely done

I enjoyed how you twisted the perspective around. The focus on her discovery, rather than the event, somehow felt more voyeuristic than the orgy itself.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 11 years ago
I agree...

... with rsqman68 - I hope this isn't the end of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
If You Don't Write More Chapters

I will come back and take some of the stars off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
OK, But

She was drunk and did not remember the party. But the invitation came weeks before that. So, what really happened?

Bibliophile614Bibliophile614over 11 years ago
More!

What happens next? Always love your stories. Would also enjoy the prequel!!

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 7 years ago

You really need to continue this story! You have done an exquisite job of creating characters with depth in just a short story. I loved it and want to read more from you. Please keep writing!!

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