Thanks for not beating her. The story and your voice made me tingle all over.More please. Dominance with pleasure for your submissive is a turn on.
You have the perfect voice for erotic audio! So deep and sexy! Looking forward to more from you. I gave you 5 stars!
Excellent. I liked the unexpected twist at the end.
This is great! I would love to hear more of this dominant, sexy man! Such a sexy voice!
Your voice has that perfect timbre for audio erotica and really for the bedroom as well. This story touches on a lot of women's dark fantasies. Well told and leaves you wanting to hear more.
Thank u for the gush of juices that just came pouring out of my pussy as I listened to you. thank you!
Why cant you want me to need the release that only you can give me? i get the control thing but your voice is waaay to sexy too have to make me do anything. I'd love please you and GIVE you the control, without the humiliation. I know its kinda corny but I want to be able to taste the need that I created in you. Is that weird? ... Prolly:)
Please make more!!! I want to hear your voice more
I never comment but this was really intense... I want more of that voice.
I've never listened to erotica, I've always been a fan for reading. However after listening to your voice and picturing the detail in the story I found myself wet and wishing you had more for me to read/hear! I know you said my story was "very powerful" but it is I who takes my hat off to you. Hope there is more from you. And feel free to get I touch with me maybe we can brainstorm things to write and you can free me from my writers block!
The combination of your voice and the story got me so wet and wishing I was the woman in your story. Hope you have other stories...=)
What a beautiful voice you have.
Listening for the second time now. Love how strong and determined your voice is, mind-blown! Please record more (and take on me too!)
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