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Artless vow........!!!!!!!!!!
no guile...no making the words pretty ..simple truth?
wonderful phrase.
Thanks, Harry... Every once in awhile a gem hits me :)
Some wonderful lines here
However, I don't understand the single word lines (would, you). For me, they detract from the poem. Interested to hear what others think - and maybe what you were thinking with the structure.
NO ANSWERS TO SLEEPING QUESTIONS
leaving doubt and remorse. TK U MLJ LV NV
Lovely!
I do understand what Desejo means, but to me the two single words lead up to the first line of the second stanza as a kind of link...
A question without an answer, of course - if only...
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