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by Anonymous

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by HarryHill12/04/12

Artless vow........!!!!!!!!!!

no guile...no making the words pretty ..simple truth?
wonderful phrase.

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by Scheherazade7312/04/12

Thanks, Harry... Every once in awhile a gem hits me :)

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by Desejo12/04/12

Some wonderful lines here

However, I don't understand the single word lines (would, you). For me, they detract from the poem. Interested to hear what others think - and maybe what you were thinking with the structure.

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by tazz31712/04/12

NO ANSWERS TO SLEEPING QUESTIONS

leaving doubt and remorse. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by demure10112/06/12

Lovely!

I do understand what Desejo means, but to me the two single words lead up to the first line of the second stanza as a kind of link...
A question without an answer, of course - if only...

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