by mw0212
"I want you know"
What does that mean?
I want you now?
I want you to know?
Great start to, hopefully, a series, or at least, a sequel, or two! I can certainly understand your "thing" for boots! One of my all time favourite outfits is knee length "go go" boots, pantyhose and miniskirt! So, if you can include these in future editions, I'd certainly appreciate it. Either way, keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
Thanks for your comment. You spotted a typo that I missed when checking my story, not a grammar error.
Should have read 'I want to know'.
Thanks again. MW
Some typos and some of the language the kid speaks doesnt add up fully, but overall, some minor corrections to be made in I hope to be an awesome series.
Keep it up.