All Comments on 'Does Auntie Know Best? Ch. 01'

by mw0212

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Hope to see more of this story in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
grammar

"I want you know"

What does that mean?

I want you now?

I want you to know?

gotranegotraneover 11 years ago
Great Start!

Great start to, hopefully, a series, or at least, a sequel, or two! I can certainly understand your "thing" for boots! One of my all time favourite outfits is knee length "go go" boots, pantyhose and miniskirt! So, if you can include these in future editions, I'd certainly appreciate it. Either way, keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

mw0212mw0212over 11 years agoAuthor
RE: Anonymous

Thanks for your comment. You spotted a typo that I missed when checking my story, not a grammar error.

Should have read 'I want to know'.

Thanks again. MW

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Waiting!

I'm waiting for more, Good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good Start Overall

Some typos and some of the language the kid speaks doesnt add up fully, but overall, some minor corrections to be made in I hope to be an awesome series.

Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Good boots story

Great to read a story with sexy boots

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