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Photoshoot with Loving Wife

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by Anonymous

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by ythebadger12/10/12

Well enough written

but the motives were too obscure to be understood and that robbed it of any sense of reality. Perhaps a longer piece might have been more interesting.

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by Erotonaut12/10/12

Alternate agenda?

Seems to me DW knew what she wanted all along. He was lucky she didn't let Cliff fuck her right in front of him.

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by x_witless_x12/10/12

What a filthy disobedient juicy bad slut.

I'm apoplectic with rage and disgust. 4*

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by 12/10/12

Show and Shoot

Sometimes I come to this site for a quick thrill. Sometimes I come here because I want to develop a relationship with a character. As I imagine myself in DW's place, I am definitely getting a quickie... but I like quickies! I hope there are more stories to follow this one. I think I would like to know DW better.

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by mudhentwo12/10/12

Blow jobs are fun!

I wonder how far she would have gone? Thanks for a hot story!

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by Anonymous12/11/12

Got me Hard

I love a good girl turned bad story.
Was hoping she would just go "ooops" and fuck the shit out of him :)

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by Remain_in_shadow12/11/12

A good one

A cautionary tale of fulfilling your fantasies, and the terrible, wonderful, awful, sexy and liberating things that you might experience giving in to your desires.

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by Anonymous12/11/12

Stunning

A delightfully erotic vignette into a fantasy I have often held, and the dare to dream just how far would it go, far enough, or too far ? ? ? ?This one hits it right on the head (pardon the pun), specific, well paced, absorbing, and definitely erotic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by oldtwit12/11/12

Great

What a great story, short, but so sensual, well thought out and written well.

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by Anonymous12/11/12

Hot

Hot story! Did you consider checking the spelling? It isn't difficult and it so improves the reader's perception of the author

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by Anonymous12/12/12

Editing

Needs editing and to be run through spell check.

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by Anonymous12/12/12

short, funny and hot :)

i like a good quickie, treating with a fantasy of mine, seeing how it might play out, and with some good, dry humour. this story is like a Christmas cookie, small & tasty - i'm glad i tried it!

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by Bridget195712/13/12

I liked your story

All and all it was a good story line. Could have been a little more indepth at certain points.

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by TEBJrNghwJqw12/23/12

Updated

Author here. I missed some spelling issues the first time (ugh!) so I issued a revision. It should read a little easier :)
Part two coming!

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by Justtoold12/24/12

good

Liked the story. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

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by LikesGoodWriting01/14/13

so real i can see it

I always enjoy stories that are believable. The faster pace of the writing during the shooting really reflected the pace on the action.. more reality.

thanks !

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by Drbeamer333302/24/13

If your going to do this, you need to have a talk and set clear boundaries.

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by Anonymous05/21/13

Which one is the bigger slut?

The wife or the idiot husband?

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by WifeWatchman07/11/13

Nice story

Very nice story, I look forward to reading more from you.

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by LarryArcher08/06/13

Great story pretty true to life

From being in the lifestyle, this has happened a lot more than you would really believe. I bet the next time, he lets his wife screw the guy. But what he should do is pick up another couple so it's much harder to be jealous of your wife sucking dick when his wife is sucking yours. Ignore all of the "gross" comments from straights, they have no clue as to what is really going on around them.

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by Anonymous12/18/13

Film Her

I like the way you went around and did what you wanted. Connie and I started that way and soon went to more. My wife got so turned on she could stop. From the first time with one now she is with five of our friends at once. She hope to get their wifes to join .

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by Anonymous06/16/14

Needs a sequel

In this one, he needs to watch and take photos while Cliff bones her. Then, during the shoot, she takes off the condom and lets him fuck her bareback and cum in her, without any birth control.

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by honeylicker112410/10/14

Hot...but

What is wifey's name? You don't say in the beginning, and then you call her DW and towards the end it's Lana.
You say she is the mother of their three kids. Where are the kids? Are they playing in the next room, able to walk in at any time?

Little details help make a story. Still gave it 4 *'s

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