great i can see it now a great family fuckfest for christmas. does every writer have to turn to family orgies in order to write or what? it is bad enough when the the parents are fucking everything under the sun ,but then we have to have tthe kids that just cant wait to become family fuck toys.
that was wrong with this story to me was it was way to short . I hope that i am guessing right that you plan more chapters . Thanks .
love the first chapter but im sure its about to turn into a orgy so i may skip the next installment.Plz later after this story could you write a mom/son series.you detailing is damn good imo and be sure not to undersell the sex,build up is great the sex scene should be just as descriptive and long.-BG
WHY DO MOST WRITERS DO THIS, START A STORY AND NEVER FINISH IT ??. WHAT HAPPEN TO DAD AND SUSAN. WHAT ELSE DID MOM HAVE TO SAY.??? YOUR NOT A WRITER, YOUR A QUIZ MASTER. HELP US OUT. GIVE US SO ANSWERS IN PART TWO. .....................LAROC OF AGES
Basic story is good, but way too short. Where's all the real hard core detail? There's plenty of opportunity to expand this to include the dad/daughter fucking their brains out, let alone the mother/son scenario being expanded some more. Hopefully, if there's a follow up, it'll deal with some of these discrepancies!
hope a part 2 is in the works. thanks
GREAT BEGINNING..BUT AS OTHERS HAVE SAID..WAYYYY TOO SHORT..AS A SUPER SEX CHARGED WIFE/MOM..SO LUCKY WITH A "JOHN AND JJ" OF MY OWN..NOTHING HOTTER..AND MAKES MOMS/WOMEN LIKE MYSELF WET AND SQUIRT.. THAN TOTAL BI FAMILY FUN ACTION..TRUST ME.. AND US..WE KNOW..SO FROM YOUR CHAPTER #1..THIS FAMILY IS DESTINED FOR THIS TYPE OF HOTTT PLAY..WITH THEIR "SWINGING" PAST..AND JJ NEEDS TO KNOW WHAT HOT BI MUSCLE FUN..STUD DAD AND HE WITH MOM IN THE MIDDLE ..CAN GET INTO...AND JUST IGNORE ANY CRITICS THAT SAY OTHERWISE..THEY KNOW IT'S BIGGG TURN-ON..JUST CAN'T ADMIT IT..
i hope they make a second part cause i love this story it makes me cum all the time
more,more,more mommy and son, daddy and daughter, brother and sister endless possibilities
...but what could have been an interesting and possibly even poignant tale of Mom-Son and Dad-Daughter love and lust quickly degenerated into a morass of stinking stereotypical garbage.
I'm going to be skipping any further installments on this tale.
This is really sexy but funny too. JJ's a cocky young boy, testosterone-riddled at his age, and he has a big thing for his mother's mommy-hole--the thing being his big stiff teenage prick. He realizes it's his mother on the bed, with her legs spread wide and her beautiful cunt just waiting to have the shit fucked out of it. JJ's more than equal to that righteous job, and he ends up unloading his hot teenage balls up where he was once a little baby. Having filled his mother's wet twat with his creamy young semen, he gets off her, grins, and says, "Merry Christmas, mom." JJ is one cool motherfucker.
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