by morninwould
Hot and saucy, well written, and left me wanting more! Looking forward to the sequel......Carney
Thank you for the feedback. And be sure to check out the real Lizzy's thread called "Bored!" In the AmPics forum.
Hot story, well written. This guy needs more. Hope he gets to fuck her soon.
The story IS hot I will give you that.
But....Don't know what the wife looks like but checked out the pictures (I am curious to a fault) but Lizzy is not worth risking a marriage over.
Thanks for the story. I enjoyed it and I am looking forward to the next chapter. I always love stories about forbidden fruit.
Oh what a great quick read, made of a lot of mens dreams, young sexy and gagging for it..... Hope that a follow up is soon to appear.
Thanks for the feedback guys. And the Lizzy idea came from Lizzy's naughty thread, and her self proclaimed title, but the Lizzy is this story if a fictional character.
And to the anonymous person who sent me feedback to say that they gave this story a "1" just because I didn't have a chapter number in the title of the story, please don't do me the displeasure of reading or rating any of my stories in the future, because you sir (more likely than madam) are an idiot.
Then you tell it again and again.
Then there's a blow job, but nothing about it is erotic. She opens her mouth. His cock goes in. He cums.
End of story.
Too bad.
Especially :the bosses daughter: aspect of it. Hope you will write a sequel one day !