All Comments on 'Enough'

The point of his story,and it doesn't match the description at all......

I can understand a husband & wife taking revenge on her attacker; avenging her attacker in nonsesnsical. Either this was a terrible spot to stop your story or it is really convoluted.

Sorry! This story was originally submitted with a second half that was rejected. Rather than rewrite it, I simply resubmitted the first half only, but forgot to change the description. My sincerest apologies to anyone expecting otherwise. It should be fixed shortly.

Don't know why it took so long, but the description has been fixed. Sorry again to whomever read the previous description.

Not bad. I think I'll visit this category again. Thanks.

I have to admit that the story was too short. I love how you quickly set the tone, built your character's persona rapidly and then???..... the story came to an abrupt end. You obviously can write so I'm going to see what else you've done.

But I thought the condition was that hypnosis could not make us do something we would not do normally?