All Comments on 'The Assassin Ch. 01'

Intriguing story. Will be looking for more.

There are numerous grammatical errors, and the sex scene jumped in a bit too quickly for a novel/novella, but your story is definitely intriguing. So far so good.

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for a hitter she isnt too smart if she doesnt know a guy that is part of the targets group. that would be part of her tracking profile. so she would know who where and what would happen after she does the hit.