All Comments on 'She Finds Out Ch. 02'

i want all of that and lots more real rough contact me at raws57@yahoo.com

You must be doing well in grade school. Many of your sentences are almost complete. A lot are somewhat coherent. Maybe when you're in 6th grade you might even write well enough for other people to read your work

Wish I found these sooner! Please ignore previous comments. You writing is awesome! I hope this continues. Maybe make him use that cage a lil longer? Put a chastity tag if you do so it ends up on that list. Readers will love this! Thanks for sharing

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What, did you run out of ideas for a third chapter and maybe more ?? shit just when it was getting to a point where the story was developing into a damn good story YOU decide to stop at chapter number 2. Come on, keep going I'm sure you have the imagination to write maybe 3 more chapters. Well from reading the previous 2 chapters, so far they are pretty good. However at this point I feel it wouldn't be fair to give it a rating at this time. But again pretty good so far.

Sorry but even the best stories are less enjoyable when the reader's mind has to constantly correct errors. Personally I really don't want or need the pee play - and I doubt many readers get turned on by it.

No fucking way! She finds out what he's been watching on the internet and assumes he actually wants to experience ALL of it? Give me a fucking break!

- Cock cage? Fuck that shit!

- Actually drinking piss? She might have asked first!

- So what's next? Her fucking other men,then feeding him a cream pie? No fucking way! ~ Making him watch her being gang-banged by a bunch of big-dicked jig-a-boos? Fuck that! ~ Having him made air tight by a couple of guys she works with? Yeah,right,like that might actually happen.

- Time to find a top-flight divorce attorney,I'd think!

Right to your hearts content I like its so hot Thank you

Amazing how moronic some authors are!!!

While not into the whole bondage thing, everything else sure sounds like fun to me.

Great story! I have never drank piss, buti have licked a few drops off a woman after she had gone to the restroom and didn't wipe it off. I love eating a creampie and have had a woman that squirted in my mouth while I was eating her pussy. I also have had a woman peg my ass with a strapon.

Which is sicker? That someone would write this, or that someone would like it?