Duplicity Ch. 05

That was hot!

So hot!

I am going to hell...

I should not be reading this shit while I am having breakfast at Applebees with the family! Now I am uncomfortable.

Oh so good...I know what you mean about reading while out eating. I've done that and had to keep looking around over my shoulders when I got to parts like this chapter.

I hope Sean's plan to tell Layla his secret doesn't backfire.

5!!!!

LOL at MimiRose! I need a tall glass water, a cigarette, a shower and a nap after this chapter…lol my mind went blank after I visualize the "X" in the scarves...panting... As they say, usually the quiet and stuck up ones are the freaks! Who knew Sean/Merle and Layla had it in them to fog up the computer screen. Can't wait to see what happens next!

@partial2passion

My dear ole' innocent Nana is now a fan of your story. I had to damn near pry my smartphone out of her hands.

Oh My!!!

I just sat here and read all 5 chapters and all I can say is he better tell her the truth soon. She's already half in love with him. I can only imagine how betrayed she'll feel when she finds out that for the most part it's been a lie. Especially with her lack of trust in the male species as it is.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

OMG!! @ Mimirose

Lol I was cracking up thinking of you sneaking glances to read the story at Applebees and now Nana??!! You're too much. Lol that made my day! Tell her I am truly humbled to have her follow my story, thats awesome. ;)

So HOT !

Great update . More please ! :)

One word.

Shit. Damn. I know...that was more than one word but HOT DAMN. I don't even know what else to say LOL! Amazing job as usual!

LOVET IT

I loved the update!!! Once Sean tells Layla who he really is I would be pissed as hell. Yes, Sean is really into Layla and I want them together, but I would feel stupid. Please update soon!!!

Creative

Another fantastic chapter!

Oh Goodness...

Please update soon. I LOVE this story!!!

Author's note: Chapter 6

Just wanted to let you know that I've uploaded chapter 6. Hopefully it will post soon. But it'll probably be at least 4 days. I'm excited to see what you guys think. ;)