I should not be reading this shit while I am having breakfast at Applebees with the family! Now I am uncomfortable.
Oh so good...I know what you mean about reading while out eating. I've done that and had to keep looking around over my shoulders when I got to parts like this chapter.
I hope Sean's plan to tell Layla his secret doesn't backfire.
LOL at MimiRose! I need a tall glass water, a cigarette, a shower and a nap after this chapter…lol my mind went blank after I visualize the "X" in the scarves...panting... As they say, usually the quiet and stuck up ones are the freaks! Who knew Sean/Merle and Layla had it in them to fog up the computer screen. Can't wait to see what happens next!
My dear ole' innocent Nana is now a fan of your story. I had to damn near pry my smartphone out of her hands.
I just sat here and read all 5 chapters and all I can say is he better tell her the truth soon. She's already half in love with him. I can only imagine how betrayed she'll feel when she finds out that for the most part it's been a lie. Especially with her lack of trust in the male species as it is.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Lol I was cracking up thinking of you sneaking glances to read the story at Applebees and now Nana??!! You're too much. Lol that made my day! Tell her I am truly humbled to have her follow my story, thats awesome. ;)
Great update . More please ! :)
Shit. Damn. I know...that was more than one word but HOT DAMN. I don't even know what else to say LOL! Amazing job as usual!
I loved the update!!! Once Sean tells Layla who he really is I would be pissed as hell. Yes, Sean is really into Layla and I want them together, but I would feel stupid. Please update soon!!!
Another fantastic chapter!
Please update soon. I LOVE this story!!!
Just wanted to let you know that I've uploaded chapter 6. Hopefully it will post soon. But it'll probably be at least 4 days. I'm excited to see what you guys think. ;)
For some reason I find this funny and sexy as hell.
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