All Comments on '"ready?" whispered'

by smithpeter

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little_samilittle_samiover 18 years ago
Wonderful poem

This poem got under my skin. Although I didn't completely understand, it made me feel tingly and I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks!

mladymladyover 18 years ago
visual

visual ... emotional and a touch creepy. but imaginist in its phrasing.

a good read ...

mlady

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
wanting

Although deprived of love ~ still wistfully dreaming.

lorencinolorencinoover 16 years ago
peel back the layers

Every time I read it, the meaning has shifted, and every time I thrill to the freshness of perceiving anew the age-old dilemma.

lorencinolorencinoover 16 years ago
peel back the layers

Every time I read it, the meaning has shifted, and every time I thrill to the freshness of perceiving anew the age-old dilemma.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
satisfy my orders

frustrations over a man called master. <br>poet trying to understand. <br>one of his "lame" bdsm poems.

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