waste of time man,,,,,,,
I first thought that your use of language was just poor. Upon further review maybe the writer is showing the disparity between the classes: the poorer reform school girl and the unattainable upper class girl. Having actually read a couple suicide notes they rarely make sense. The note writer is certainly not being logical or coherent at the time. You have managed to put forth the unrequited feelings of years and of loss but still managed to make it seem less organized than it actually is. My compliments for a job well done!!
well said but if you really fel this way know escape is nt the answer! you have value and a purpose!
That was so sad.. You brought tears to my eyes.. I don't care about how you wrote it or if you made mistakes or not all i care about and wanna say is that i really felt it..
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