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by Anonymous

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by greenmountaineer12/22/12

The enjambment was well done. I usually don't care much for the erotic poems here, but this was really good.

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by tazz31712/22/12

SEX ON THE STANDUP

I am sure the brain is not involved TK U MLJ LV NV

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by erectus12312/23/12

nicely done

the first lines are great, perhaps drop detail of career to make more universal,and suggest more in final line, there a little mysterious detail would add- gave it a 5-

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