by MollyRedTape
Reasonably well-written story with believable characters. Do watch your consistency, however, as you said she was handcuffed and also that her hands were tied. Pick one and be consistent.
Heh, consistency is apparently not a concern here. He has a problem with cheating, but wants to share her with all his friends and get sloppy seconded even more. What the fuck?
We want to see him beat the little cheating cunt until she's howling and screaming for him to hit her harder and harder.
Stop using the word squirt, it's gross and not sexy at all. It's ruining an otherwise good story.