All Comments on 'Reluctance Ch. 01'

Read through all your posted work. Very good 'git er done' monkey spanking material. However, you seem overly fond of the word slut. It. Gets. Old...Very Old....Very Quickly. Upgrade your work by upgrading you vocabulary. Oh, and go easy on the caps. They can hear ya on the next smart phone over.......

Look forward to more heavy breathing with you.

I'm so jealous of this girl...want her place