All Comments on 'Chains and Firelight'

good use of tension and suspense, I would drop the redundant "Holy Cow" twice as it does not add; also how to you undress after you slit off costume that dropped to floor or did I miss something. The cum in mouth was very nice touch. A little tightening and it be razor sharp. Thanks for sharing, who wouldn't let you fuck them after that poem? -4

of a good dress....

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My first review! Thank you so much! What a pleasure!

@erectus, yes you missed something - the dress was slit only up the front, to her hip ; ) Something else was sliced. Loved the constructive feedback.