All Comments on 'Whim'

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ShesUrDreamShesUrDreamabout 11 years ago
Pour me a cup of your whim

What a delightful story!!! Absolutely believeable ... wonderful surprise at the end!! Well done!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Shades of Byron

She writes in beauty like a lovely night

with nubile beauties for our delight

Okay, so Byron didn't write erotica--or did he? If so, nothing like this little gem. Perfect!

More, girl, more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Pout

Thank you so much!! You have a little gem of talent there, and having read all your work, it's clear your talent extends to all your pieces... The story was amazingly skilled and you hid the plot twist so well at the end!! Its rare for something so beautifully simple to be so craftily hidden!! Thank you so much for letting us share in your beautiful talent.

E xxx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More Than Perfect

This little daydream is more than perfect. Thank you for sharing your delightful Whim with us. I look forward to to reading more ... and real soon too!!

chipcarverchipcarverabout 11 years ago

Really liked it and it was a surprising improvement over your first story. I liked the suppense at the end promising more to come.

KarenEKarenEabout 10 years ago
Not Bad

A little short, would love to see what happens next!

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Dream on

Perchance to dream. Or, perhaps, a spooky foretaste!

UncertainTUncertainTabout 1 year ago

Wow, what a rude awakening but some healthy promise!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

That made me squirter

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I've become an avid reader on Literotica and have been frustrated on more than one occasion when a story (a good storyline and plot) starts and then the author seemingly disappears without finishing. As I have begun posting my own stories, I alway try to finish my story before...