All Comments on 'Melody'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Welcome back

Happy New Year to you. I admired your older stories and it is great to have you back. Hope to read more father daughter stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Love your writing!

Your writing is always a notch above the rest, I have read all of your other stories and

I'm glad to see a new story from you. This one is steamy!

GianettaGianettaover 11 years ago
Tender and Erotic

I'm glad you're back. You have a gift for dialogue and erotic sensibility.

Ca501Ca501over 11 years ago
Not bad

Worthy of a short series

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

You should continue the story after the mom gets back, i wanna know what happens

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I would love a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
can I change my rating?

I've re-read the story, and loved it. Wanted to give it 5 stars. Saw that I had already given it one star. Can't remember why. 5 stars it is!

8titulos8titulosover 3 years ago

I really, really like the stories where the daughter has a hairy pussy, I got an issue with that; not necesary a full bush but a trimmed one it's ok. I mean, they don't want look like a kid, they want to look like a real woman, a big girl for their daddies. Grettin's from México

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