All Comments on 'My Hands My Sister Ch. 02'
by aleaffalls
- 13 Comments
Swifthawkover 11 years agoGreat story, well written. You are a bit of a tease...just a little bit at a time. lol...love it and thanks for sharing!
Anonymousover 11 years agoThe thoughts, feelings and emotions are again fresh and exciting, just like in chapter 1.
But there's an unanswered question that kept popping up in my head - you touched on it here just like in chapter 1 - what happened, that made them feel this way for each other?
You kept hinting at it and, although it just may have been (very effective) teasing, I was hoping you would expand on that topic. Unfortunately, at this point, I can't really imagine any realistic explanation. But maybe you'll surprise us yet :).
-- YT
StVitus71over 11 years agoBrilliantly written, good pace & very enjoyable
MrBeagleover 11 years agoYou are an excellent storyteller...please continue with the adventures...and the e.e. cummings reference in your bio ...now that's brilliant!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoEven better than chapter one. I can't wait for chapter three. Thank you so much for writing these for us.
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