All Comments on 'The Alien, Report 009-010'

if you didnt want to finish it or something of that sort you didnt have to...

went from being an actual erotic story to being a mindless/whorthless wham, bham, thank you mam affair

whelp, makes it easier and lightens my daily load of stories to check for release's of

Not only are these epically short chapters you just made the plot go from nice erotica to holy hell back away from me dude type story.What happened? Cause you just took that expolring race and turn them into something where there is a wonder anything is left of the race

what a troll of a story!

love that you keep him alien with his lack of compassion - too many alien stories end up humanizing far too much and then the main sci-fi twist is kind of lost. hope you finish it sometime and also you should edit a bit more, the meat is all there but you need work on the trimmings as it were