All Comments on 'Demon Surrogates'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
he flips from her side to her back

then kisses her mouth? Agile ;-) Interesting little tale and well written

TheTitLoverTheTitLoverabout 11 years ago
Nice

I enjoyed it. A pity the husband didn't get more action and the demon didn't want her arsehole serviced, but I still enjoyed it.

warnoswarnosover 9 years ago
Nice

Good story, very well written shame you didn't do another 3 chapters of the demon having fun with the children.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Would have loved to read the high school kids' story, too. Demon convinces them to have an orgy or something. Ugh, yes.

agamottoagamottoover 7 years ago

I agree with the previous two posters, how about telling the story of the kids, and maybe a furtherance of the plot with the demons relatives?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
kids?

i so want to see the kids

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