All Comments on 'Apartment 2B'

Good job I love a dominant male write more :)

Five.

I thought she was dreaming after she hit her head. It was good but it flowed too fast between her hitting her head and sexing up 2B.

I have to agree with one of the other posts, this was just a wee bit too fast after she hit her head. It needed a little bit more build up before the deed.

I'm 5"9, not at all obese yet full to say the least. I've been working so hard at the gym to be a thin tall girl but I don't think I was meant to be shaped like that haha! Anywho, loved it! Can't wait for more and the pace seemed fine to me.

I enjoyed Ellis's musings while her tenant was in the shower--so sexy. How great to have a female character with a strong sex drive who is not ashamed of it. Also, I enjoyed the humor of Ellis's creative cussing. It's effective example of dialogue that develops her character along with furthering the plot. So refreshing to read about a female lead that has an open and honest appreciation of men without the guilt or without being portrayed as a slut. Your male character was so attractive too. You included just the right amount of physical description along with characterization.

I thought the buildup was fine and the story was sexy.

Oh so good, love the woman’s perspective for a change