All Comments on 'A Lazy Afternoon'

Liked it, but needed to be more descriptive, imo.

If a story can't engage your interest in the first few paragraphs and continuously annoys you, it's not worth continuing. And I came to this decision much sooner than that.

a different take on the whole mc gig. Great fun to read, and quite hot. A bit more description would be nice, though not a great deal more...sentences not paragraphs. Also can't wait to see where this is going. Will look for future episodes. nice one.

I fucking love all of your stories! To me, the finer details don't matter as long as I can cum!

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Nice build-up however if this were written as a series, with explicit details of the girls actions, that would be great