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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Far Too Short (Again)

Title says it all. Wham, Bam, Thankyou Mam. Lengthen your stories out, they could be really good. You've mentioned a half slip in at least 2 of your stories - slips ARE a turn on for a lot of readers, so you could expand here as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Lost me at he's 26 and she is 42.most women last 30 years are older having kids today.Make her 52 more realistic.Women in their 50s can still look like their 40.(Salma Hayek).

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