All Comments on 'Little One Ch. 01'

A great beginning and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks love. I was very hesitant at first, but your comment has given me some hope for this story. I submitted the next two chapters, so they should be on very soon. I have alot of plans for these two.

Xo

-Insidehermind

I love the short and sweet story. It has just enough detail, and isn't overbearing...I can picture what's happening and I love it. And the sub reminds me a little of me in terms of her attitude and how she reacts to him. love it and can't wait to read more :)

and dialog. A good beginning. A bit of heart and soul in this one. I like...

Very good! I'm looking forward to reading more :-)

I need this :(

short and sweet. wish it was a bit longer, but I'm excited to read the next chapter