All Comments on 'Intake'

Very confusing. I know it's BDSM, but it reads more like sadism and humiliation. You jumped from Step and the therapist to the "girl" without prelude or anything.

OK for a first submission, I guess.

Lee

The mental process that Julia uses would be extremely effective on a masochist of any degree. The mask and speaking in third person becomes the safe refuge for the hypnotized, for a stronger reaction to the reality of an orgasm. Thank you for approaching this in a way which does actually work, in the proper setting.