All Comments on 'The Lake Monster Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
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awesome more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Keep going this is one of the best stories on here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
If I may be so bold...

I know that in a lot of stories, multiple partners is rather sexy in stories on this site. That being said, I'm also a hopeless romantic, and the way things have built up between Nikki and the mermaid, I would like to see the mermaid not like Elena's scent, and reject her, even if it's after they started getting hot and bothered together.

Maybe it's just my personal tastes, but it seems like there is much more than a physical connection from the way these have read so far, and I think it would be endearing to see Nikki grow too jealous to share, and the mermaid not wanting to anyway, despite them trying it.

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