All Comments on 'Chandra's Just a Friend'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sorry

Yeah, sorry about the 1 star rating. I usually don't do that here. The story was a good effort but it just went on and on and kept bringing more and more people in. Next time maybe break it into several parts or try to maintain more focus

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
That's right!

Of course there were more people involved. A small crowd watching public spontaneous sex is the nature of exhibitionist and voyeur.

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