All Comments on 'Xolt 2 Ch. 03'

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Rahtid about 11 years ago

i have enjoyed your stories.....please continue the series....longer chapters please....

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

So glad to see more of this story. Brandon and Zhi are perfect for each other and I see some interesting happenings ahead. The story, characters and writing are all very good; I look forward to reading more.

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Grand

I cannot wait for more.

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Awesome!

Looking forward to more soon!

lonesomedove66 about 11 years ago

The tease

What will make Brandon crack I wonder!! Such a tease is our Xolt but it is going to be fun to see how these two develop together and I agree Brandon can't be this accepting something is going to cause him to break soon and why is he afraid of children??

Happy New Year I love this story can't wait for the next chapter

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