All Comments on 'A Disciplinary Hearing'

by pinupgirl87

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Dvus_DDvus_Dabout 11 years ago
Dvus_D

A very well written story. I love the language used.

MichaelinChinaMichaelinChinaabout 11 years ago

You tell a story well. Nicely paced to build up the sexual tension in the characters. Good to see you placing yourself in the action. It makes it more believable.

Hope to see more Hannah.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
What?

This is Non-Consent. Rape fantasies in the workplace. Oh, and the woman likes it. Not. Disgusting.

pinupgirl87pinupgirl87about 11 years agoAuthor
It was not well categorised

I had intended to put it in the group sex category, I am sorry that you did not enjoy reading this. I am unsurprised that it is not to everyones tastes. I am also aware of a number of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. I did not use word processor, rather I composed and uploaded straight from Literotica so was not prompted to make corrections. I should have proof read this and intend to do so next time. xxx

writerjabwriterjabover 10 years ago
Good job!

Sure there's some errors, but I often wonder the people who point them out, do they ever submit a story? Small errors are one thing, dull ass writing another. It did seem a bit light on description, but doesn't make it wrong. All in all, I liked it and look forward to more of the same from you.

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Story writing was excellent

The writing was excellent The story was sad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wonderful, my secretary wife is regularly fucked by her boss and his assistant, she has been given a clothing allowance so she can buy lingerie, in the mornings she takes him a coffee and he gives her a mouthful of cream, he regularly sends me photos of her with his cream running down her chin or photos of her bent over the desk showing her fucked, spunky pussy, as for me I have an eighteen year old assistant who I am training to be an anal slut, my wife is happy with this as she tells me she can now fart without constant fear of following through. Happy days.

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