All Comments on 'An Unorthodox Sales Contest Ch. 09'

This was a very, very hot scenario, but it felt really rushed.

Rushed? I agree. I'm trying to find a balance between too much detail and moving too quickly. Thanks for letting me know that you'd like it less rushed. I'll look at upcoming chapters and work on that detail. Please let me know what you think. The next chapter that I'm working on (not already on line) is Chapter 11. Again, thanks so much for your comment.